hmm, I really like the expression on her face, but I feel that the massive amount of light on the background sort of draws my attention a little too much.
If I could make any outside comment to help this picture, I'd say crop on the right with the background highlight, taking your model both out of the very middle of the picture, placing her eyes right into one of the points of interest in composition, and placing her back into the center of focus once more.
10 months ago
cercina says:
If I could make any outside comment to help this picture, I'd say crop on the right with the background highlight, taking your model both out of the very middle of the picture, placing her eyes right into one of the points of interest in composition, and placing her back into the center of focus once more.